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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Butterfly Kingdom - Chapter One

    Hey, there is one thing that I think really needs to be corrected 'It’s the coward’s way out, writing letters. We could have talked, he could have told me, I ...

    Jan 31, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Peace!

    Hey, I think that the posts above have pretty much covered everything. I may not be correct, but, were you trying to write this story from a British persons point ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re:

    I think that Moo has covered a lot of the problems with this piece so I'm just going to say what I think about the piece. For starters, you included ...

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Fight for Nemazania - Chapter 1

    Stuff! The story does have potential! You just need to use more description to set the scene... I mean right now in my mind I just have an empty room ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Breaking Dawn Parody

    I nearly died laughing! As soon as I was done reading it I sent a link to all my friends, they too are discussing it and crying with laughter! I ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Other » General, General Re: The Bible?

    I do get what you are saying, however the Bible does say that you have to be a child to get in to heaven and therefore I think that you ...

    Jun 10, 2009


You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension: a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You’re moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You’ve just crossed over into… the Twilight Zone.
— Rod Serling