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Re: Butterfly Kingdom - Chapter One
Hey, there is one thing that I think really needs to be corrected 'It’s the coward’s way out, writing letters. We could have talked, he could have told me, I ...
Jan 31, 2012 -
Re: Peace!
Hey, I think that the posts above have pretty much covered everything. I may not be correct, but, were you trying to write this story from a British persons point ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re:
I think that Moo has covered a lot of the problems with this piece so I'm just going to say what I think about the piece. For starters, you included ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Fight for Nemazania - Chapter 1
Stuff! The story does have potential! You just need to use more description to set the scene... I mean right now in my mind I just have an empty room ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
I nearly died laughing! As soon as I was done reading it I sent a link to all my friends, they too are discussing it and crying with laughter! I ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: The Bible?
I do get what you are saying, however the Bible does say that you have to be a child to get in to heaven and therefore I think that you ...
Jun 10, 2009
